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The fire, the flames, the pain of these games.
My heart, your life, the blade of this knife.
A fold, a tear, the red of your hair.
And now, it's true, my desire is you.

Nameless you stand, and the touch of your hand,
I feel it on my skin.
The scent of your hair and the beauty you share.
It leads my mind to sin.

Just let me breathe you in.
Just let me breathe you in.
Just let me breathe you in.

I'll hold you tight, as we dance tonight.
Your mouth, your eyes, the ultimate prize.
As you get near, I start to fear.
That now, you seem, to be just a dream.

Now we're alone with you in my arms,
I can't let you go.
Moving back and forth with our bodies in sync.
We are both fast and slow.

I will not let you go.
I will not let you go.
Please don't let me go.

The light starts to dim as you're fading away.
Why can't this dream last forever?
I sit here each night and I look into the dark,
And remember our time together.

I'll love you forever.
I'll love you forever.
I'll love you forever.
I miss our time together.
You're eyes shut forever.
Eternally together.
My eyes close forever.

We'll always be together...
©2009-2010 ~samuelsimpson
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Final draft (I think...)

Full title is "And The Flame Burned Red (Oxygen)"

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:iconxtryxtoxseex:
This is REALLY good. You have fantastic rhythm and are....a better poet than I could ever be.
I suck at poetry.
:D

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If I had a superpower, I would glow when everything else in the world seemed dark.
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Thank you. Poetry is something that I am fairly new at. I used to simply write prose, but have branched out a bit now. This has built up over the last few weeks and is now a fully fledged song and I am very proud of it. Thank you again for your compliment.

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